I’m continuing my DIY MFA by writingÂ about Wuthering Heights and Pride and PrejudiceÂ and, though I’ve already discussedÂ each book’sÂ central relationship in a previous post,Â my thoughts are still on romance.Â I think there are two types of book romances. First, there’s the type of romance in which the author tells the readerÂ that the characters are in love, usually from the first scene in which the characters lay eyes on each other, and the stated fact of that love is supposed to be enough to get the reader interested and invested in their love story.
The other kind of romance, the kind I prefer, is the Pride and Prejudice, Eleanor and Park variety, in which the characters develop deep love and understanding over time. By showing us how the relationship develops, the author earns our investment in that love working out in the end. I’ve noticed that this kind of romance frequently begins with the two characters actively disliking each other. Is the dislike a necessarily component of the romance? Do the characters ever feel ho-hum, just okayÂ about each other, then fall in love?
The characters beginning with active dislike is an incredibly effective narrative device. First, it gives the characters’ feelings more runway, so they get to change more over the course of the book. It’s more satisfying for a character’s feelings to travel the long distanceÂ from dislike to love, than if they were to change from ambivalence or mild like to love.
Secondly, the initial dislike shows an attraction, and is itself the kernel of the connection that will later develop. My mother used to always say, “Hate is not the opposite of love,” which was a way of saying that a person who inspires us to love him or her can more easily inspire other strong feelings, like hate. For instance,Â Elizabeth’s dislike for Mr. Darcy is still a connection; he occupies her thoughts because he aggravates her. But she is thinking of him, much more so than she would be if she’d hardly noticed him, or thought nothing of him one way or another.
It might seem odd to think of dislike as an attraction, but in our own lives this is very true. Just think about when you’re mad at someone. You might tell all your friends about the unbelievable thing that person said, the way he or she betrayed you, or the way you plan to get back at the object of your anger. The person you’re mad at occupies your thoughts and energy, just as a person you’re falling in love with does.
The more books I think consider, the more I find this to be true, that two charactersÂ dislike each other upon first meeting. Furthermore,Â the initial dislike or distrust is oftenÂ most strongÂ on the femaleÂ protagonist’s side. My hunch is thatÂ a story in which the boy’s affection is constant while the girl’s affection must be earned appeals heavily to girl readers, who are probably the intended audience in romance-heavy Young Adult novels.
Other examples of this pattern:
- Anne of Green Gables by L.M. Montgomery – In this book (well, really, in the series) Anne and Gilbert start out as competitive and argumentative with each other.
- The Raven Boys by Maggie Stiefvater – In this series, Gansey is rich and entitled, and embodiesÂ all that Blue dislikes.
- The Hunger Games by Suzanne CollinsÂ – Katniss dislikes Peeta because at first he appears to be playing along with the games, and because he doesn’t seem to have any skills that will help him survive. She questionsÂ his motives when he befriends some of the other competitors.
I still have lots to say about the narrative voice of Wuthering Heights and Pride and Prejudice, so there will be a future post about that. It’s just that right now I still have romance on the brain. I’m going to be paying a lot more attention as I read to see which stories fit into or break this “hate first, love second” mold.